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The Rich Lion and The Poor Rabbit

            Once upon a time in really picturesque country, lived a flaming charismatic rabbits,called angel without wings and a rich lion whose hair turned yellow because of his mean personality. Someone said they were not a couple. The wife with an even worse personality had rainbow colored hair. The poor rabbit and his wife faults was their kindness and good looks. The good looking poor couple was chased away by the rich lion that deserved to be punished. The poor rabbits had rags for clothes, but still look good. They had many kids that were demanding food with no other choice, the poor rabbit had dark circle down to his wife and went to the rich lions to get some food. He alone did not know that it’s pitiful.

            Then, rabbit arrived at the rich lion’s house. The poor rabbit went to the rich lion to get one bowl of rice. His legs shaked and his mouth was dry because the air was so cold. Eventhough the poor rabbit was begging, the rich lion’s wife has gone crazy and was too busy dancing around with her fan and she refused the poor rabbit’s and slapped his cheek. Suddenly the poor rabbit found some rice stucked on his cheek. It’s really sad to watch him eat those.

            One day there was a swallow, eventhough he looked like a penguin. Overracting and playing with a hackysack in front of the poor rabbit’s house.

            “I’m the God of hackysack!” the swallow said.

            But suddenly he fell while he’s goofing off. It’s a hopeless situation. The poor rabbit couple, who were angel without wings, helped and fixed the swallow’s legs. Then the swallow was well and thanked to the rabbits couple. He becames a penguin and flies away. Then one day, the penguin comes to visit the rabbits couple. That swallow come with a roses in his mouth and asked to the poor rabbits to plant it in the back of house. After several days, the couple’s bond, which was about to break up because of roses became stronger. The roses grew well into a large gourd.

BANG!!!!

            The gourd opened and all kinds of food poured out. It looked like the food that the poor rabbit never eat before. The poor couple rabbit finally got a good response because their good behaviour.

Message of this story :

Those who do good, will definitely get a good response as well.

Name : Eka Resti Gunawati

Class : 3D

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